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THE LETTER TO SAY GOODBYE by ~sexipyro216:iconsexipyro216:

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rip me open
throw me away
tear out my heart
cuz you know ill still stay

slap me around
treat me like shit
it's okay go ahead
maybe i deserve it

i should have never cared
i should have kept my Space
then i wouldn't want
to leave this fuckin place

i think perhaps
i have found my escape
i'll get my pretty blade
and my life i'll soon take

don't worry though
ill leave a little list
one to say goodbye
to all the people i will miss

maybe you'll be happier
with me not in your life
maybe you won't notice
the little bloodstaind knife

i'm sorry to all the people
that will carethat i'm gone
i'm sorry that i left you
but you should still move on

i'm sorry to myself
for thinking people cared
but i'm mostly really sorry
that no one's even there

AMBER   8-30-05
©2005-2010 ~sexipyro216
:iconsexipyro216:

Author's Comments

I wrote this poem on august 30th....i was so shocked about it i guess i didn't know what to say...anyways, this sone is really sad...so bear with me...

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~IXtearsofbloodXI Dec 1, 2005, 7:42:03 AM
Okay out of all of em i can really relate to this one especially right now and i love it its totally awesome and well written its got my fav!!!

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~LoVe Iz SuIcIdE~
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~CBR600RR Jan 3, 2007, 4:29:42 PM
wooow only 1 reply in all that time :S

well i to can really relate to this one

it weird to see something this close to what i'm feeling sometimes but written by someone else

another awesome work and again another fav ;) :)
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~sexipyro216 Jan 3, 2007, 6:48:18 PM
thanks...i really apperciate all the favs, you must really like my work, lol....but you gotta submit something

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"If you love me like you told me, please be careful with my heart. You can take it just don't break it or my world will fall apart..."
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~CBR600RR Jan 4, 2007, 6:53:02 AM
lol
yeah i know but i'm still at my moms so i don't have all my programs are the time to work on it, but i am collecting and even writing down most of my ideas so i really really hope i can make something out of it :D (i'm a bit to perfectionistic i think, i just hate to ruin a otherwise perfect picture :blush: )

but yeah i really do like your work ;):aww:
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